Day 10
Series entry #2 an attempt at a continuation from series entry #1 or you may know it as it's alias "Day 9". I am fond of the idea of this one but I think I missed a logic step in it's execution. I'm making an effort to publish it first and critique it later because I tend to obsess and I would never post anything because I would change little things as they came up. This allows me to post something imperfect and think about it and make solid, informed decisions about what needs to change. Yay Day 10!
I like it! This is a great series, Thomas.
ReplyDeleteMaybe panel 3 is "B" reacting/responding.
ReplyDeleteOr maybe better: "C"